Question

教育部倡導(dǎo)學(xué)生：每天鍛煉一小時(shí)；健康工作五十年；幸福生活一輩子
請你根據(jù)以上提示，用英語準(zhǔn)備一份發(fā)言稿，向同學(xué)們講述一下陽光體育活動(dòng)的有關(guān)情況，并就高中學(xué)生是否需要每天花一小時(shí)鍛煉，談?wù)勀愕目捶�及理由�?br />注意：1．發(fā)言稿應(yīng)包括以上所有信息，要有適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
2．詞數(shù)：120左右。
3．參考詞匯：陽光體育活動(dòng)a national student sports program；教育部the Ministry of Education
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Answer 1

Good afternoon, everyone,
Hundreds of millions of students from primary, middle schools and universities all over China joined in a national student sports program. Eleven million students in Shandong took an active part in this program.
The ministry of Education calls on students to exercise for an hour every day, in the hope that they will have good health to work fifty years and enjoy the whole life.
Personally, I think it a good idea for us senior students to have daily exercise. Although we take an hour a day for exercise, it is well worth it. Taking exercise helps us build up our body and keep a clear mind. Therefore we can work more efficiently.
Thank you!

試題分析：這是一篇半開放性作文，討論的話題是健康鍛煉對身體的作用。可以敘述學(xué)校的體育訓(xùn)練的情況。主要是在自己的個(gè)人看法中加以發(fā)揮，當(dāng)然是認(rèn)為體育鍛煉很重要，可以鍛煉我們的身心，提高健康的水平。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語言來表達(dá)某種觀點(diǎn)或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時(shí)能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達(dá)能力。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，比如join in，take an active part in，call on，build up one’s body；并注意了句子的銜接如： therefore，although，Personally 等等。in the hope that they will have good health to work fifty years and enjoy the whole life.運(yùn)用同位語從句。Taking exercise helps us build up our body and keep a clear mind.運(yùn)用動(dòng)名詞短語作主語。