Question

你和美國的網(wǎng)友Peter相互了解對方國家的傳統(tǒng)節(jié)日，請根據(jù)下表要求寫一篇關(guān)于感恩節(jié)( Thanksgiving Day)的文章，放在你的微博里，請Peter賜教。

起源	美國
目的	最初為感謝印第安人，現(xiàn)在人們常在這一天感謝他人
慶祝國家	美國和加拿大
時間	美國：每年11月的第四個星期四 加拿大：每年10月第二個星期一
慶祝方式	休息兩天，家人團聚，互相問候，表達感恩
傳統(tǒng)食物	火雞

注意：
1．請使用規(guī)范英語，詞數(shù)不少于100;
2．可適當加入細節(jié)，以使內(nèi)容充實、行文連貫；
3．參考詞匯：火雞Turkey。
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Answer 1

Thanksgiving Day，which was created by Americans, was aimed at giving thanks to Indians, the local people in America, who helped the European settlers go through the hard days at the very beginning.   
Now Thanksgiving Day is mainly celebrated in America and Canada. In America , it falls on the fouth Thursday in November, but in Canada, it is celebrated in second Monday of October.
On this special day, people have two days off and all family members get together to enjoy time with their family. It is a tradition to eat turkey on that day.
Nowadays, people show gratitude to parents, friends or anyone who is helpful by greeting each other. The theme of Thanksgiving Day  has added even more meanings, which will become more and more popular.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱類書面表達，文章的要點也基本上都給出來了，而且很具體，考生要把要點解釋清楚，不能有遺漏。除了表達這些要點以外，還要闡述自己的觀點，這就要求考生自己拓展發(fā)揮，在寫作的過程中，要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型，如強調(diào)句，倒裝句等，讓文章更上檔次。同時在列舉措施的時候要使用合適的連接詞如：First，second， Besides, What’s more等，讓文章看起來很有條理，也很流暢。本篇文章在寫作時不要啰嗦，力求簡潔。
【亮點說明】所給范文語言簡潔，運用了一些詞組：falls onhave two days off get together范文中的句式多變，運用不同的語法知識：Thanksgiving Day，which was created by Americans, was aimed at giving thanks to Indians, the local people in America, who helped the European settlers go through the hard days at the very beginning.這句話用了兩個定語從句， It is a tradition to eat turkey on that day. 這句話用了it做形式主語。Nowadays, people show gratitude to parents, friends or anyone who is helpful by greeting each other. The theme of Thanksgiving Day  has added even more meanings, which will become more and more popular. 這兩句話都用了定語從句。