Question

在生活中，你或者你的朋友都有可能遭遇過(guò)這樣的尷尬：年長(zhǎng)的人不能理解或誤解你們這一輩比較流行的文化現(xiàn)象，比如說(shuō)：“快閃（flash mob）”。請(qǐng)你就此“generation gap”的現(xiàn)象由此展開(kāi)想像或結(jié)合你的實(shí)際經(jīng)歷以第一人稱(chēng)寫(xiě)一篇英語(yǔ)短文。內(nèi)容應(yīng)包括：1. 你的這次被誤解的具體經(jīng)歷；2、你當(dāng)時(shí)的心情； 3、你如何向長(zhǎng)輩解釋清楚你的“古怪”行為。
注意：1、詞數(shù)不少于120；
2、不能使用真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱(chēng)。
3、“快閃”只是提供一個(gè)例子，你可以自由地選取任何“流行文化現(xiàn)象”進(jìn)行描述

Answer 1

Last year, my school club was putting on a cosplay show on the campus, and I was given an important role. Thrilled as I was, I tried not to tell my family about what was going on, which was actually quite natural for a boy in his “rebellious period”.   After getting home from school, I went straight into my room and tried my costume on quietly. When I was making myself up, I got so concentrated that I didn’t hear my grandfather who was asking me to dinner. Much to my surprise, he suddenly opened my door and came in, and it didn’t take long for him to get totally shocked. For what seemed an eternity, the two of us stood in stunned silence, not knowing what to say. Imagine his dismay when he saw me dressed up like a madman!
We both tried to avoid each other later that day, and I could tell he was more than angry. Even my parents put some pressure on me. I didn’t know what to do at first, because I thought he was overreacting—I was just preparing for the show!
I got a little depressed for a while, but realizing it couldn’t solve the problem, I tried to help them understand what cosplay was all about. I didn’t go up close to my grandfather right away. Instead, I went to my parents first. With their support and help, my grandfather finally gave credit to what I was doing. After all, it’s communication that matters.

試題分析：考查半開(kāi)放性作文。半開(kāi)放性作文給出了一個(gè)話題，并有部分的文字提示。給考生自由發(fā)揮的余地較大。對(duì)于考生的綜合能力要求較高，要求考生有很強(qiáng)的謀篇布局的能力和組織要點(diǎn)的能力。在完成開(kāi)放性作文時(shí)，首先要選擇自己熟悉的短語(yǔ)或者句型，在你的能力范圍之內(nèi)，選擇句式時(shí)要賦予變化，因?yàn)檫@樣你才可以更好的駕馭。同時(shí)也要選擇合適的連接詞，把各個(gè)要點(diǎn)組織成一個(gè)完整的整體。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇范文用了一些常見(jiàn)的詞組：Much to my surprise“使我驚訝的是”, more than angry “非常生氣”，put some pressure on “給….施加壓力”， gave credit to“贊揚(yáng)”，After all “畢竟”,還使用了高級(jí)的句型：Thrilled as I was, I tried not to tell my family about what was going on, which was actually quite natural for a boy in his “rebellious period”.這句話用了讓步狀語(yǔ)從句的倒裝句和定語(yǔ)從句， When I was making myself up, I got so concentrated that I didn’t hear my grandfather who was asking me to dinner. 這句話用了so…that…句型， For what seemed an eternity, the two of us stood in stunned silence, not knowing what to say.這句話用了賓語(yǔ)從句，非謂語(yǔ)動(dòng)詞， I got a little depressed for a while, but realizing it couldn’t solve the problem, I tried to help them understand what cosplay was all about.這句話是動(dòng)名詞做主語(yǔ)和賓語(yǔ)從句， it’s communication that matters.這句話是強(qiáng)調(diào)句。