Question

假設(shè)你是學(xué)生李華，近日你班同學(xué)參加了世界自然基金會WWF組辦的“我為哥本哈根減斤碳”活動，大家開始在日常生活中減少能源、紙張等的消耗。請根據(jù)以下四幅圖提供的信息，給某英文雜志寫一篇以“Low-carbon Living”為題的英文稿件，介紹你們參加此次活動第一天的具體做法并談自己的看法。
字數(shù):100詞左右，  標題和開頭已給出，不計入總字數(shù)。

Low-carbon Living
Recently, my classmates and I participated in the activity of Low–carbon Living organized by the WWF.
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Answer 1

Low-carbon Living
Recently, my classmates and I participated in the activity of Low–carbon Living organized by the WWF. On the first day, we chose to go to school by bike or on foot rather than by bus or car. Before we left the classroom, we made sure the lights and the computer were switched off. In order to make full use of paper, we began to write on both sides. Besides, while shopping, we no longer used plastic bags but carried environmentally friendly ones.
I think what we did on that day was meaningful, which can help us to form a good habit. We should also call on the people around us to do something for low–carbon living. Only in this way will the earth be a good place to live on.

試題分析：這是一篇看圖寫作，一共四幅圖。做題時：1. 認真讀圖，可知四幅圖講述的是你班同學(xué)參加了世界自然基金會WWF組辦的“我為哥本哈根減斤碳”活動，2. 初步構(gòu)思，考慮用詞、短語、句型和時態(tài)。3. 連詞成句，然后再連句成文。盡可能地充分利用所學(xué)的短語或句型來表述具體的內(nèi)容。4. 反復(fù)審核，修改錯誤。5. 注意所給的漢語提示。一般說來，看圖寫話中的漢語提示往往給定了有關(guān)的時間、地點、人物等相關(guān)的信息，還有參考詞匯都是有用信息。在把握了文章的中心后，應(yīng)在內(nèi)心構(gòu)思一個基本的框架，并考慮使用恰當?shù)脑~語、短語和句型，以充分地表達文章的內(nèi)容。這是體現(xiàn)自身能力的重要一環(huán)。然后再將各圖的單個句子串連起來。串連時，要注意使用適當?shù)倪B接詞語或過渡性語句，不至于讓讀者覺得文章中出現(xiàn)跳躍現(xiàn)象，更使上下文更為緊湊、自然。
【亮點說明】范文中不乏好的詞組和句型，如：rather than而不是，made sure確保， switch off關(guān)掉，call on sb to do something號召某人做…，In order to make full use of paper, we began to write on both sides. 這句話用了目的狀語，while shopping, we no longer used plastic bags but carried environmentally friendly ones.這句話用了狀語從句的省略式，I think what we did on that day was meaningful, which can help us to form a good habit. 這句話有主語從句和定語從句，Only in this way will the earth be a good place to live on. Besides,這句話用了倒裝句。