Question

假如你是李平，今年暑假去打工, 參加社會實踐活動。請你根據(jù)下面的提示用英語寫一篇短文“An Unforgettable Experience”，以發(fā)表在校刊上。

工作地點	一家肯德基（KFC）快餐店
工作時間	四個星期，每天8小時
工作情況	當(dāng)保潔員（cleaner）,工作辛苦且枯燥, 每天要起早貪黑地工作，差點中途放棄
你的體會	遇到了一些沒預(yù)料到的困難，認(rèn)識到了勞動（labor）的意義……

注意：1. 必須使用第一人稱;
2. 不要逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)擴(kuò)展，總詞數(shù)120左右;
3. 要求字跡工整，卷面整潔。
An Unforgettable Experience
                                                                
                                                                
                                                                
                                                                

Answer 1

An Unforgettable Experience
During the summer holidays this year, I thought I should do something meaningful instead of staying at home, so I got a job at a KFC fast food restaurant and worked there as a cleaner. I worked eight hours a day for four weeks.
The job was hard and boring and seemed endless, which made me so tired that I nearly gave it up halfway. After all, I stuck to it with determination. Every day I started off for work early in the morning and got home late in the evening. Finally I finished the job before the new term began.
Although I met with a lot of difficulty in the work, it helped me understand better what labor means. I think it is really a successful experience.

試題分析：本文屬于提綱類作文，要求考生根據(jù)所給的寫作要求和提綱，確定文章的中心思想，然后緊緊圍繞中心思想展開寫作。要求考生在保證內(nèi)容要點全部概括的基礎(chǔ)上可以充分發(fā)揮自己的想象，進(jìn)而用自己的語言來表達(dá)某種觀點或看法，增添了寫作的靈活性，同時能較好地考查考生的想象能力和英語語言表達(dá)能力。
點評：寫好提綱式作文的關(guān)鍵是認(rèn)真審題和分析所給的提綱，因此考生首先要認(rèn)真閱讀前面的提示，認(rèn)清寫作要求和提綱之間的關(guān)系，然后確定文章的主題、文體、人稱和時態(tài)。根據(jù)所給提綱，列出要點，并以此為基礎(chǔ)充分發(fā)揮自己的想象力，靈活運用英語知識，采用不同的表達(dá)方式將各要點完整地表述出來，注意主次分明，詳略得當(dāng)。語言力求準(zhǔn)確、簡潔。根據(jù)情景的發(fā)展，按順序安排好材料。同時應(yīng)選用合適的連接詞或過渡詞，使文章具有一定的連貫性�？忌�必須認(rèn)真查驗是否有漏寫情況，有無拼寫錯誤及標(biāo)點誤用等。