Question

假設(shè)你是王陽(yáng)，你的網(wǎng)友李明給你發(fā)來(lái)電子郵件，告訴你今年寒假他要去國(guó)外旅行，想讓你給他一些有關(guān)國(guó)外旅行的建議。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示給他回一封電子郵件。
1. 建議：
事先了解該國(guó)語(yǔ)言、歷史、文化及風(fēng)俗習(xí)慣；
保管好身份證、護(hù)照、錢及其他貴重物品；
遵守當(dāng)?shù)胤�律，尊重�?dāng)?shù)仫L(fēng)俗習(xí)慣；
遇到麻煩，向警察或中國(guó)大使館求助。
2. 祝李明旅途愉快。
【寫作要求】
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參考詞匯：大使館embassy
Dear Li Ming,
I’m very glad to know that you will travel abroad to spend your winter vacation. I’d like to give you tips that will help you travel safely and happily…
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Sincerely,
Wang Yang

Answer 1

Dear Li Ming,
    I’m very glad to know that you will travel abroad to spend your winter vacation. I’d like to give you tips that will help you travel safely and happily…
First of all, in order to enjoy your trip, you should learn about the language, history, culture and customs of the countries to which you are traveling. Second, when traveling, keep an eye on the things you take, such as your ID card, passport, money and other valuable things. In addition, different countries may have different law and customs, and you must obey local laws and customs. Finally, if you are in trouble, don’t hesitate to ask a policeman or go to the Chinese embassy.
Have a good journey!
Sincerely,
  
                                           Wang Yang

試題分析：本文是寫一封建議信。第一部分：說明寫信的目的：給他一些有關(guān)國(guó)外旅行的建議。第二部分：介紹詳情，提出建議。分為四點(diǎn)：1.了解風(fēng)俗習(xí)慣2.保管好貴重物品3.遵守當(dāng)?shù)胤�律，�?xí)俗4.遇到麻煩求助。第三部分：提出希望采納建議盼望回復(fù)。
點(diǎn)評(píng)：建議信結(jié)構(gòu)： 第一部分：說明寫信的目的。 套語(yǔ)如：來(lái)信收到，得知你今年寒假他要去國(guó)外旅行，我建議…… I’m very glad to know that you will travel abroad to spend your winter vacation. I recommend that…/I’d like to give you tips that will help you travel safely and happily…第二部分：介紹詳情，提出建議。套語(yǔ)如： 我建議…… I’d like to suggest that … ；May I suggest that…； In my opinion …； I would like to make a recommendation that … ；I am writing to advise you of …；If I were you, I would …； 第三部分：提出希望采納建議盼望回復(fù)。套語(yǔ)如：請(qǐng)仔細(xì)考慮我的建議，謝謝。 Please take good consideration of my advice. Thanks.