Question

請根據(jù)下列提示要點(diǎn)，以 “The ways to keep healthy “為題，寫一篇作文。
提示：1.人人都想保持健康
2. 飲食要健康：多吃水果，蔬菜們因為它們富含纖維素和維生素；少吃黃油，奶酪、咖啡和巧克力，因為它們含糖和脂肪太多，糖和脂肪會讓你迅速變胖。
有良好的生活習(xí)慣：定期鍛煉，充足的睡眠，不要過度勞累，不抽煙等。
要求：1. 短文須包括上述所有要點(diǎn)，科適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使短文連貫。
2. 詞數(shù)120 左右。
                                                                               
                                                                                      
                                                                              
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                                   
                                                                                        
                                                                                    
                                                                                   
                                                                                   
                                                                                  
                                                                                                              

Answer 1

The Ways to keep Healthy
As we all know,people want to keep healthy.But how can we do that?It seems mysterious.So I think we should eat more vegetables and fruits,because they contain a lot of vitamins.We shouldn't eat butter,cheese,chocolate and drink coffee,because they contain a lot of
sugar and fat.It can make you become fatter and fatter.In a word,we'd better have a balanced diet.We also need to take exercise everyday and have a good rest,so that
we can keep fit at once.By the way,we shouldn't stay up too late and we'd better not smoke.In this way,I'm sure that we can become very strong.

試題分析：這是一篇話題類作文。請根據(jù)下列提示要點(diǎn)，以 “The ways to keep healthy “為題，寫一篇作文。
提示：1.人人都想保持健康2. 飲食要健康：多吃水果，蔬菜們因為它們富含纖維素和維生素；少吃黃油，奶酪、咖啡和巧克力，因為它們含糖和脂肪太多，糖和脂肪會讓你迅速變胖。3.有良好的生活習(xí)慣：定期鍛煉，充足的睡眠，不要過度勞累，不抽煙等。需要寫的內(nèi)容已經(jīng)粗略給出，需要我們翻譯成完整通順的句子，適當(dāng)添加些內(nèi)容，使文章更充實(shí)。寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。一定要給出自己的看法。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型為文章潤色。注意要求的詞數(shù)120詞左右，不要太多也不要太少。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】So I think we should eat more vegetables and fruits, because they contain a lot of vitamins.這里含有一個賓語從句；In this way, I'm sure that we can become very strong.這里含有一個賓語從句。