Question

請(qǐng)認(rèn)真觀察下面的漫畫，簡(jiǎn)要描述漫畫內(nèi)容，并根據(jù)你對(duì)該漫畫的理解，結(jié)合學(xué)習(xí)實(shí)際，談?wù)勛约旱乃伎己涂捶ā?br />
參考詞匯：缸：vat；
漏出來(lái)：leak out；
漏洞：loophole

Answer 1

One possible version:
In the picture, four people are trying to fill a vat with water. Two men are carrying water while two others are pouring water into the vat. However, with so many loopholes at the bottom of the vat, they’ll never store any water, because no one tries to mend the holes.
It reminds me of the problems in our study. While studying, we always try to read more books and do more exercises. However, we seldom pay attention to the mistakes we’ve made, nor do we try to correct them. Therefore, “holes” are left. Day by day, there appear more and more “holes”, or rather the shortages. No matter how many books we’ve read, we have never mastered any knowledge because they have leaked out through the hole.
So we should pay attention to the mistakes we’ve made and the holes we have in our study. Only in this way can we learn much knowledge and fill up our mind with it.

試題分析：這是一篇看圖作文，由圖畫中所反映得問(wèn)題來(lái)聯(lián)系實(shí)際談?wù)剬W(xué)習(xí)中存在的問(wèn)題。寫作時(shí)不僅要將畫面所包含的有效信息直接運(yùn)用英語(yǔ)思維轉(zhuǎn)換成英語(yǔ)語(yǔ)言文字進(jìn)行描述，而且要就此聯(lián)系實(shí)際而展開敘述。展開時(shí)需要圍繞畫面所反映的實(shí)質(zhì)問(wèn)題談?wù)勛约旱乃伎己涂捶�。寫作時(shí)注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時(shí)態(tài)（因?yàn)槭强陀^描述圖畫，又是談?wù)勛约旱乃伎己涂捶�，所以用現(xiàn)在范疇的時(shí)態(tài)），上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】范文對(duì)圖畫的描述僅僅用了三句話：一個(gè)簡(jiǎn)單句，兩個(gè)復(fù)合句。這充分顯示了作者概括提煉圖畫所反映內(nèi)容的能力。接著作者用“It reminds me of the problems in our study.”這個(gè)過(guò)渡句，就很自然地聯(lián)系到我們的學(xué)習(xí)中存在的問(wèn)題。將圖畫中的“缸的漏洞”與“學(xué)習(xí)中的錯(cuò)誤”很緊密地掛起鉤來(lái)，順理成章。然后就對(duì)“學(xué)習(xí)中的漏洞”問(wèn)題普遍存在的處理問(wèn)題提出了自己的觀點(diǎn)“小洞不補(bǔ)，則會(huì)吃大苦”，為后面的議論埋下了伏筆。最后一段為本文增添了亮點(diǎn)。范文中所用詞匯非常豐富，且雅俗共賞。