Question

面對(duì)高考，父母孩子們都有著沉重的壓力。請(qǐng)仔細(xì)觀察下面漫畫，寫一篇短文。要求：
1．描述漫畫內(nèi)容，如情景、人物、動(dòng)作等等；
2．著重描述漫畫所表達(dá)的現(xiàn)象以及你的看法。
注意：1. 可參照?qǐng)D中文字及下面文章開頭所給提示，作必要的發(fā)揮想象。
2．詞數(shù)150左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
3. 作文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。內(nèi)容可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，注意行文連貫。

As is vividly shown in the cartoon, while the boy is still in sound sleep,
                                           
                                                                           

Answer 1

One possible version:
As is vividly shown in the cartoon, while the boy is still in sound sleep, the father is observing his watch and saying to the mother who is carrying the breakfast,“It’s time to wake him up…”
As a Senior Three student, study time seems much limited. As a result, more and more students try to work hard from early mornings till late evenings, even stay up too late. Our parents are worrying about the college entrance exams, so they cruel-heartedly stop the child from sleeping.
In my opinion, enough sleep is necessary. Otherwise we would feel tired both physically and mentally. What we need is to have a real rest, instead of getting more tired. So doing nothing tiring in this period is really good for us.
Our life should be pleasant. How we are looking forward to some relaxing exercises! How we wish to have a free chat with my classmates or just take a walk! After all, health is far more important than study.         (155)

本文是一篇看圖作文，內(nèi)容貼近考生實(shí)際。對(duì)考生的要求較高，要求描述圖片內(nèi)容，并列出要點(diǎn)，表達(dá)出看法。描述圖片時(shí)要注意說明爸爸媽媽的形態(tài)，圖片內(nèi)容即高考在即，學(xué)生壓力很大，挑燈夜戰(zhàn)，導(dǎo)致睡眠不足。個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)父母要注意不要給孩子太大壓力，只要盡力就行了！在寫作時(shí)注意使用高級(jí)詞匯和恰當(dāng)連接詞。