Question

請根據(jù)下圖所展示的內(nèi)容及你對此圖的理解用英語寫一篇短文。短文應(yīng)包括：

1. 對圖片內(nèi)容的概括性描述；
2. 看了圖片后的感想；
3. 怎樣回報父母對你的愛。
注意：
1. 建議參照圖中文字及下面文章開頭所給提示，并作必要的發(fā)揮。
2. 詞數(shù)150左右。開頭已經(jīng)寫好，但不計入總詞數(shù)。
3. 作文中不得提及考生所在學(xué)校和本人姓名。

Answer 1

We all know that our parents' love for us is beyond description. Wherever we are, they love us for no reason, but how do we show our love for them in return?
As the picture shows, the boys know their own, their friends’ and even their idols’ birthdays very well. Yet when asked about their parents’ birthdays, neither of them can give a correct answer. Sure enough, this picture just gives us an extreme example. But what the picture tries to tell us is that we shouldn’t ignore our parents’ love. They sacrifice so much bringing us up! They work hard to provide us with all that we need, but seldom do we ever think of how we can repay them for their love.
What this picture reminds me of is that when we receive our parents’ love, we shouldn’t just take it for granted. Instead, we should try our best to think what we can do in return. We should work hard at our lessons, in the first place, to live up to their expectations, which I believe will make them happy.

試題分析：這是一篇圖表類作文，我們需要用正確的英語把給出的要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來.本作文中給出的要點(diǎn)比較具體,故需要準(zhǔn)確表達(dá).寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運(yùn)用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。特別注意在選擇句式時要賦予變化，尤其是數(shù)字的不同表達(dá)法。
點(diǎn)評：本文屬于圖表類作文，動筆前，一定要認(rèn)真分析要點(diǎn)，理解要點(diǎn)要表達(dá)的含義，不能遺漏要點(diǎn)，跑題偏題。平時除了加強(qiáng)詞匯積累，寫作聯(lián)系以外，還可以適當(dāng)記憶一些類似的范文，這樣在考試中可以起到事半功倍的效果。