Question

請看下面兩幅圖，你有什么感想？請就此寫一段話，內(nèi)容應包括:
· 這幅圖說明了一個什么現(xiàn)象？對此你是怎么看的？
· 簡述父母對你的意義。
· 我們該為父母做些什么？
· 也可寫你其他的一些觀點。
注意：（1）詞數(shù)不少于80；
（2）在答題卷上作答。
 
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               

Answer 1

As is vividly depicts in the cartoon, the old man is sitting on the coach with disappointment and sadness, because no one comes back to celebrate with them. Although they received a lot of presents from their children, they feel very miserable.
Nowadays, young men look so busy and independent that they move out and mind their own business every day. On usual days, they would not like to take their time to visit their parents with the excuses of busyness. On some festival days, they probably share a little time to drop in their parents or even just send some presents but don’t show up personally.
Recently, a new law came into effect, which urges young people to visit their parents frequently . However busy we may be, we should spend more time talking with them and accompanying them, because they once gave us so much selfless love that we should return them the same from the bottom of our heart.

試題分析：這是一篇漫畫作文，談論的是孝敬父母和近期出臺的探望父母的法律的話題�？磮D作文要求考生將畫面所包含的有效信息直接運用英語思維轉換成英語語言文字，再根據(jù)這些要點謀篇布局。要求考生把看到的圖畫用文字表達出來，除了能表達清楚圖畫中的信息外，考生還需要根據(jù)詞數(shù)要求，適當拓展并發(fā)揮想象，從而使文章的敘述不單調�？忌�首先要對圖畫的內(nèi)容進行描述，然后圍繞圖畫的信息進行說明或議論。此時考生一定要注意把握圖畫的中心思想，寫出圖畫要反映的內(nèi)容。寫作時不要僅僅對要點進行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
【亮點說明】As is vividly depicts in the cartoon, the old man is sitting on the coach with disappointment and sadness, because no one comes back to celebrate with them.這句話用了非限制性定語從句和原因狀語從句，Although they received a lot of presents from their children, they feel very miserable.這句話用的是讓步狀語從句， Nowadays, young men look so busy and independent that they move out and mind their own business every day. 這句話是用了so…that…句型， Recently, a new law came into effect, which urges young people to visit their parents frequently 這也是非限制性定語從句，However busy we may be, we should spend more time talking with them and accompanying them這句話用了however引導的讓步狀語從句。