Question

科學技術在日新月異地發(fā)展，它們在人們生活中的應用越來越廣泛，但是也帶來了一些問題。結合下面的圖畫，談談科學技術給人們造成的影響。

注意：
1．詞數(shù)：100—120詞左右。
2．開頭已為你寫好，不計入詞數(shù)�？蛇m當增加細節(jié)，以使行文連貫。
From the above pictures, we can see the following scene.

Answer 1

Form the above pictures, we can see the following scene: in the past when father came back from work and stepped into the house, his wife would bring him a cup of hot coffee and his little son used to happily greet him with “Daddy”, and his daughter would throw away her book to welcome him, which made him glad and also “Hi” to them happily.
But now when father gets home, he finds that his son is addicted to playing computer games and his daughter is busy phoning her friends and his wife is absorbed in watching TV series. Everyone is doing something and cares nothing about his return. The father doesn’t become angry because he is also dealing with his business with a cell phone.
What the pictures reflect is that the wide use of technology is beginning to influence the relationship between family members, who seem to have no time communicating with each other.

試題分析：這是一篇看圖作文，談論的是科技對生活的影響，可以從科技快速發(fā)展之前的情況和之后的情況差異進行分析。寫作時不要僅僅對要點進行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。同時注意題目要求必須使用5個句子表達全部的內容。
點評：看圖作文要求考生將畫面所包含的有效信息直接運用英語思維轉換成英語語言文字，再根據(jù)這些要點謀篇布局。要求考生把看到的圖畫用文字表達出來，除了能表達清楚圖畫中的信息外，考生還需要根據(jù)詞數(shù)要求，適當拓展并發(fā)揮想象，從而使文章的敘述不單調。如果是記敘文類的寫作素材，考生要注意故事的時間、地點、人物、事件的起因、過程、結果這六個要素；如果是說明文或議論文，考生則首先要對圖畫的內容進行描述，然后圍繞圖畫的信息進行說明或議論。此時考生一定要注意把握圖畫的中心思想，寫出圖畫要反映的內容。