Question

In your spoken English class, your teacher shows you the following picture. You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it.
請根據(jù)下面提示，寫一篇短文。詞數(shù)不少于50。（請將開放作文寫在答題卡指定區(qū)域內(nèi)）

Answer 1

An English proverb has it that “it’s no use crying over the spilt milk”. This picture precisely captures one of such situations—a bottle of milk has been accidentally dropped onto the ground. The reactions of the two individuals in the pictures are totally different. One exclaims “Oh, God, it’s all finished!” whereas the other one is more positive and calm, claiming that “there is still some left.”
There are rich implications underlying this scene. For the same event, two different individuals make two totally different observations and comments. For the pessimistic mind, they tend to give up. Finally, they would blame the failure on others.
By contrast, people with an optimistic state of mind would turn the negative into the positive, through efforts. With strong willpower, they would persist to the end, convinced that as long as they keep trying, their hard efforts would pay off. Those are the people who can often succeed where others fail. Obviously, they are the people whom we should try to emulate.

試題分析：這是一篇開放式作文，也是看圖作文，認(rèn)真讀圖，可知圖畫反映了人們對待同樣問題的不同看法，寫作時不要僅僅對要點進(jìn)行生硬的翻譯，而是要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準(zhǔn)確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
【亮點說明】范文出現(xiàn)了一些常用的詞組：tend to往往， blame sth on sb把…歸咎于…，By contrast,相比而言，還有復(fù)雜的句型：An English proverb has it that “it’s no use crying over the spilt milk”.這句話用了賓語從句和it做形式賓語， One exclaims “Oh, God, it’s all finished!” whereas the other one is more positive and calm, claiming that “there is still some left.”這句話用了現(xiàn)在分詞做狀語， There are rich implications underlying this scene.這句話用了現(xiàn)在分詞做定語， With strong willpower, they would persist to the end, convinced that as long as they keep trying, their hard efforts would pay off.這句話用了過去分詞做狀語和as long as引導(dǎo)條件狀語從句， Those are the people who can often succeed where others fail. Obviously, they are the people whom we should try to emulate.這兩句話都用了定語從句。