Question

在中國西部貧困地區(qū)有許多留守兒童。他們的父母外出打工掙錢養(yǎng)家。以下這幅圖片展現(xiàn)了這群留守兒童的一個生活場景。請根據(jù)你對這幅圖片的理解用英語寫一篇短文。你的短文應包含以下內(nèi)容:
1. 描述圖片內(nèi)容；
2. 簡析“留守兒童”這一現(xiàn)象的成因；
3. 談談你的感受和愿望。
參考詞匯： 文具stationery(不可數(shù)名詞); 留守兒童left-behind children
要求:
1）詞數(shù)：150詞左右。短文開頭已為你寫好，不計入總詞數(shù)。
2）文中不得提及考生所在學校和本人姓名。
As is shown in the picture, several children are crouching (蹲)to the ground in a circle.   

Answer 1

As we can see in the picture, several children are crouching to the ground in a circle. They are writing down “Mum and Dad, I am missing you.” These left-behind children badly need stationery, dictionaries, schoolbags, TV sets and so on to do well in their studies and enjoy their everyday life.
One of the reasons is that they live in a less-developed western area with poor transportation and a low-level education. To improve their living conditions, their parents have to go to big cities to make more money, leaving them at home.
Personally, I really feel sorry for them and I believe that each child should have the right to receive a good education and enjoy a happy life together with their parents. I suggest we do something such as donating clothes or books, raising money and so on to help them.
I’m sure they will be able to live a happy and healthy life in the future if more people would like to offer help to them.               (152 words)

試題分析：這是一篇看圖作文，認真讀圖，可知圖畫反映了留守兒童的一個生活場景，寫作時不要僅僅對圖畫進行描述，也要添加些內(nèi)容，使文章看起來更充實，要組成一篇通順連貫的短文。需要注意緊扣文章主題，給出的要點都需要包括，缺一不可。寫作時注意準確運用時態(tài)，上下文意思連貫，符合邏輯關(guān)系，一定要契合給出的開頭，不能出現(xiàn)文章脫節(jié)問題。盡量使用自己熟悉的單詞句式，同時也要注意使用高級詞匯和高級句型使文章顯得更有檔次。
【亮點說明】這篇范文最大的特點是使用了詞組和句式多變：have the right to 有權(quán)利做…，enjoy a happy life享受幸福的生活， together with和…一起， One of the reasons is that they live in a less-developed western area with poor transportation and a low-level education.這句話用了表語從句， To improve their living conditions, their parents have to go to big cities to make more money, leaving them at home.這句話用了不定式和現(xiàn)在分詞， I suggest we do something such as donating clothes or books, raising money and so on to help them.這句話用了虛擬語氣。