Question

在即將告別母校的時(shí)刻， 你想表達(dá)你對(duì)母校、老師、職員和同學(xué)的感恩之情。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格所列要點(diǎn)，以The last moment held on to(難舍時(shí)刻)為題， 用英語寫出一篇短文。

感 恩	對(duì)象	存欄記憶	未來與祝福
	母校	美麗校園，快樂家園	越來越好
	老師	教授知識(shí)，給予幫助	銘記在心
	職員	關(guān)心照料，撫育成長(zhǎng)	永遠(yuǎn)開心
	同學(xué)	相處和睦，情同兄弟姊妹	保持聯(lián)系

注意：1.詞數(shù)：90詞左右；2. 短文中不得提及真實(shí)人名、校名及地名；3. 短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已為你寫好（不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；4. 從上面的四個(gè)對(duì)象中任選三個(gè)對(duì)象進(jìn)行寫作。
參考詞匯： 知識(shí) knowledge; 職員 staff members; 永遠(yuǎn) always/forever
The last moment held on to
How time flies! We’re just leaving you—our lovely junior middle school. I have so many words from my heart to say.
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Thanks, all my loved ones. All the best to you! Goodbye!

Answer 1

The last moment held on to
How time flies! We're just leaving you-our lovely junior high school. I have so many words from
my heart to say.
Thanks, dear junior school. You're a beautiful and happy home for us all. I hope you'll be better
and better. Thanks, dear teachers. You're taught us lot of knowledge and helped us in all ways. I'll
remember you forever. Thanks, our staff members. You've taken good care of us and helped us grow
up. I hope you are happy all the time. Thanks, dear classmates. You've got on well with me just like
sisters and brothers. Let's always keep in touch  
Thanks, all my loved ones. All the best to you ! Goodbye!

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)和一般將來時(shí)態(tài)，主語是第二人稱，注意時(shí)態(tài)語時(shí)間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式，為文章增色不少.如: I hope you'll be better and better.我希望你越來越好, You've taken good care of us and helped us grow up你無微不至的關(guān)懷我們幫助我們成長(zhǎng)等,學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.