Question

提示：假如你叫王平，參加了學(xué)校的“有煩惱向誰說？”的調(diào)查活動（a survey）。
調(diào)查結(jié)果：1、大多數(shù)向同學(xué)、朋友說（理由：年齡相仿，容易交流和理解）
2、一些向老師、家長說（理由：經(jīng)驗豐富、可以得到幫助）
3、少數(shù)自己獨立解決（理由：不愿與人交流，難以與人相處）
請你根據(jù)中文提示用英語給某報社編輯寫一封信（信的開頭與結(jié)尾已經(jīng)給出），說明情況并提出你自己的觀點。字?jǐn)?shù)80-100詞，不必逐句翻譯，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
Dear Editor,
I am a high school student. Recently we have made a survey ----“To whom do you go when in trouble?” Here are the results.
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Yours Sincerely,
Wang Ping

Answer 1

Dear Editor,
I am a Grade 9 student. Recently we have made a survey –“To whom do you go when in trouble?” Here are the results.
Most students will go to their classmates or friends when they have trouble because they are almost the same age. They can talk with and understand each other easily. Some will tell their teachers or parents about their problems as they have rich experience and they are helpful. Only a few solve their problems by themselves. They hate to talk with others and can’t get on well with other people, either. They have few friends.
I think we’d better ask our teachers, parents, classmates, and friends for help when we are in trouble.
Yours Sincerely,
Wang Ping

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。這是一篇調(diào)查表，調(diào)查的內(nèi)容分為三部分向朋友訴說的；向家長老師訴說的；不想向別人訴說的。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少.如: Some will tell their teachers or parents about their problems as they have rich experience and they are helpful 用到了短語tell sb about sth; get on well with sb與某人相處的怎么樣,學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理.