Question

如今，旅游已經(jīng)成為人們喜愛的一項(xiàng)活動(dòng)，請(qǐng)你根據(jù)以下提示寫一篇短文，向大家介紹一下你所熟悉的一名旅游愛好者的基本情況以及他(她)的一次旅行經(jīng)歷。
提示：
1. What’s his/her name?   2. What’s he/she like?  3. How often does he/she travel?
4. Where did he/she travel to?  5. What did he/she do?
注意：1.可適當(dāng)增加細(xì)節(jié)，以使行文連貫；
2.詞數(shù)：80左右。

Answer 1

                                    
Travelling
My friend Lily is a travelling lover. She is tall and always has a sweet smile on her face. She travels to foreign countries with her parents once a year .
This summer vacation,she went to Korea with her parents and sister.They went there by Korean Air and really enjoyed themselves on the plane.It took them 3 hours to get there.Things were fine in Korea.They stayed in Korea for 5 days.They visited many places of interest.Besides,they bought many special products,such as pickles，seaweeds and so on.In short,this is an unforgettable trip.     

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文作者以熟悉的一名旅游愛好者的基本情況以及他(她)的一次旅行經(jīng)歷,介紹情況用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，講述旅行經(jīng)歷用一般過去時(shí)。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，例如has a sweet smile on her face,enjoyed themselves, places of interest.,such as,and so on,in short, by air等短語; 固定句型It took them 3 hours to get there; 文章層次清晰，表達(dá)流暢。