Question

假設(shè)你是李明，你的筆友Peter來(lái)信談到他所居住的城市，并希望了解你家鄉(xiāng)無(wú)錫的情況，請(qǐng)你用英語(yǔ)寫(xiě)一封回信。內(nèi)容提示如下：
無(wú)錫位于中國(guó)東部，由諸如惠山區(qū)（Huishan District）、錫山區(qū)等6個(gè)區(qū)組成；
因太湖(Tai Lake)而出名，過(guò)去許多工廠經(jīng)常向湖里傾倒廢棄物；
最近政府已經(jīng)采取措施減少污染，……
每天我們都能看到一大群游客；每年來(lái)無(wú)錫的最好的時(shí)間是春天；
5. 我希望……
注意：
短文須包括所給內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，要求語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫；
第3和5要點(diǎn)內(nèi)容共須用2～3句話(huà)展開(kāi)合理想象，作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右，短文的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾句已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
Dear Peter,
It’s very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown Wuxi. ____________________________________________
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I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours
Li Ming

Answer 1

Dear Peter,
It’s very kind of you to write to me and let me know about your beautiful city. Now I’d like to tell you something about my hometown Wuxi. Wuxi lies/ is in the east of/ eastern part of China. It is made up of six destricts such as Huishan Destrict and Xishan Destrict. It is famous for Tai Lake. Many factories used to put its waste into the lake./ In the past, many factories put its waste into the lake. Recently the government has taken action to reduce pollution. (Wuxi has become one of the most beautiful cities.) Every day we can see a huge army of / a large group of/ …visitors here. The best time to visit Wuxi is (in) spring. (I hope you can come and visit soon. I’ll show you around it. I’m sure you’ll have great fun.)
I’m looking forward to hearing from you.
Yours  
Li Ming

試題分析：本文是一篇提綱作文。題目所給要點(diǎn)比較詳細(xì)。我們要用準(zhǔn)確的語(yǔ)句把每一個(gè)要點(diǎn)都表達(dá)出來(lái)。要做到語(yǔ)句通順，意思連貫。也可以適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，但一定要圍繞主題。本文主要以第三人稱(chēng)書(shū)寫(xiě)。介紹過(guò)去受污染用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，介紹政府已采取措施用現(xiàn)在完成時(shí)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】It is made up of six destricts such as Huishan Destrict and Xishan Destrict. It is famous for Tai Lake. Many factories used to put its waste into the lake.這幾個(gè)句子寫(xiě)得非常好。