Question

根據(jù)中文和英文提示，寫(xiě)一封意思連貫、符合邏輯，不少于50詞的文段。
目前，北京的車(chē)越來(lái)越多，對(duì)空氣產(chǎn)生極大影響。某網(wǎng)站在開(kāi)展出行方式大討論。假如你是李華，你喜歡哪種出行方式？請(qǐng)根據(jù)提示詞語(yǔ)和相關(guān)問(wèn)題，給網(wǎng)站投稿。稿件的開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，其詞數(shù)不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
請(qǐng)將稿件的內(nèi)容寫(xiě)在答題卡上。
提示詞語(yǔ)：expensive,  relax,  easy,  be good for,  reduce,  save energy 
How do you go to school, by car, by bus, by bike or on foot?
Which way is the best?
What are the advantages?
Dear Editor,
I know you are organizing a discussion about the ways of going out. I’m a middle school student and I want to join the discussion.
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Yours respectfully,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Nowadays, you can see more and more people riding bikes on the road and I am one of them. I go to school by bike because I think it’s the best way. Why do I like riding a bike? Let me tell you the reasons.
First, it's not expensive to buy a bike and I can afford one or more. Second, I can relax myself while riding a bike. It’s good for my health and it’s easy to get a place for a bike. Third, the most important thing is that riding bikes can not only reduce pollution but also save energy. I hope everybody can ride a bike to go to school, go to work and travel to other places.
Let's ride bikes from now on!

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們以李華的身份給一個(gè)網(wǎng)站投稿，內(nèi)容是關(guān)于現(xiàn)在由于車(chē)多而帶來(lái)的污染問(wèn)題。這篇作文中已經(jīng)給了我們開(kāi)頭，我們需要接著這個(gè)開(kāi)頭繼續(xù)往下寫(xiě)。作文中的內(nèi)容主要有三個(gè)部分，一是你自己上學(xué)的方式，二是哪種方式是最好的，三是這樣做的優(yōu)點(diǎn)是什么。我們?cè)趯?xiě)的時(shí)候，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，可以適當(dāng)補(bǔ)充。寫(xiě)這篇作文的時(shí)候，一定要注意明確寫(xiě)作的主題，并主要圍繞這種交通方式的好處來(lái)展開(kāi)，這是文章的主體部分。另外，要注意語(yǔ)句之間的連接，多用一些好的詞匯和短語(yǔ)，使文章表達(dá)流暢，內(nèi)容完整，語(yǔ)句通順。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的范文。這篇短文中作者著重寫(xiě)的是自己的上學(xué)方式以及這種方式的好處。文章主題鮮明，主次分明。首先，作者就開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山點(diǎn)明了自己的上學(xué)方式—騎自行車(chē)，go to school by bike because I think it’s the best way。接下來(lái)是這篇作文的中心，為什么喜歡騎自行車(chē)上學(xué)。作者給了我們?nèi)齻�(gè)理由。這里面使用了比較多好的短語(yǔ)和句型，如it's not expensive to buy a bike and I can afford one or more、It’s good for my health、the most important thing is that riding bikes can not only reduce pollution but also save energy。而且這些句型在使用時(shí)都非常的正確。這篇短文語(yǔ)句通順，表達(dá)流暢、完整。