Question

在日常生活中我們都會遇到壓力，尤其是初三學(xué)生。你是如何排解壓力的呢？請以“How to reduce the pressure ” 為題，寫一篇90詞左右的文章，闡述自己的觀點。
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你遇到的壓力（pressure）是什么？（如作業(yè)多、考試成績不理想等）
你是如何減輕（reduce）壓力的呢？(如聽音樂、看電影、和朋友聊天，鍛煉身體等)
How to reduce the pressure
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Answer 1

How to reduce the pressure
Now ,we are under too much pressure, it's very important to reduce the pressure.
I have too much pressure. For example ,1 have too much homework. I stay up doing homework every day. I feel very tired. I try my best to study, but I still can't have good grades. I'm always sad.
I always reduce the pressure by sleeping. After I wake up, I will forget all my problems. I'll get happy, I also listen to music to reduce the pressure. It's helpful for me, too. Sometimes, I reduce the pressure by watching TV.
Even if we are under too much pressure, we should face them happily.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文，介紹自己如何排解壓力。本題所給材料比較簡單，需要自己圍繞材料適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。在寫作時要注意時態(tài)，人稱和固定詞組的搭配，要注意語言的規(guī)范性,注意應(yīng)用所給單詞，短語。結(jié)合材料可知本文主要是一般將來時態(tài)，第一人稱，注意主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，序數(shù)詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，、條理清楚，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文注意避免句式重復(fù)而且使用了大量的的短語，stay up， try my best to ， After I wake up，also，Sometimes，Even if，Now。可見該生英語功底扎實。