Question

某校提出“走路上學(xué)”的倡議，請(qǐng)你就這一話(huà)題寫(xiě)一篇100詞左右的英語(yǔ)文章，內(nèi)容可包括：走路有利健康，和朋友結(jié)伴有利于……讓父母節(jié)省……使城市……等；可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。注意文中不得出現(xiàn)真實(shí)的人名、校名等相關(guān)信息。
參考詞匯：be good for, with friends, save

Answer 1

I think going to school on foot is good for us. First of all, walking to school is a wonderful way to exercise and it’s good for health. Next, it’s fun to walk together with friends every day. We can talk about something interesting and know each other better. What’s more, if we walk, our parents won’t have to drive us to school. There will be fewer cars in the city. More walking and less driving help to make our city cleaner. The streets won’t be as crowed as they are now. I hope more and more students will go to school on foot.

試題分析：本篇書(shū)面表達(dá)應(yīng)抓住“走路有利健康，和朋友結(jié)伴有利于……讓父母節(jié)省……使城市……”等關(guān)鍵信息，緊扣 “走路去上學(xué)”這一主題，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，從“走路上學(xué)”和 “優(yōu)點(diǎn)”兩個(gè)方面來(lái)寫(xiě)。同時(shí)，要充分利用參考詞匯，并注意對(duì)于詞數(shù)和相關(guān)信息的要求，要采用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪^(guò)渡詞。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語(yǔ)，為文章增色不少。如:It’s fun to ..., if從句，as crowded as, more and more, walk to school, go to school on foot等.行文流暢，過(guò)渡自然，采用恰當(dāng)?shù)倪^(guò)渡詞，如first, next, what’s more等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理.