Question

第三中學(xué)要舉行一次畢業(yè)典禮，假設(shè)你是一名優(yōu)秀的畢業(yè)生，學(xué)校安排你在會(huì)上做演講，談?wù)勀愕膶W(xué)習(xí)體會(huì)。
要求: 1. 詞數(shù)在80個(gè)左右。
2. 用上所給詞語，條理清晰，意思連貫，標(biāo)點(diǎn)正確。
參考詞匯：graduate, excellent, help, way, learn, award
                                                                                             
                                                                                 

Answer 1

Hello, everyone. I’m happy to give a speech about my studies. During the past three years, what I remember is to learn something from anyone around us, because everybody has his own good ways. We should learn and help each other. We must pay attention to the way we study, too. We will graduate, but I think we shouldn’t stop learning. We need to work hard to become excellent people, then our dreams can come true. Thank you for giving me the Excellent Student Award.

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文，談?wù)勛约旱膶W(xué)習(xí)體會(huì)。題目只給出了主要寫作內(nèi)容，故動(dòng)筆前先要認(rèn)真閱讀題目，確定寫作要點(diǎn)，然后圍繞要點(diǎn)適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。寫作中，應(yīng)注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結(jié)合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是用一人稱，一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)進(jìn)行敘述。語言的表述應(yīng)該符合語法的結(jié)構(gòu)，造句應(yīng)該符合英語的表達(dá)習(xí)慣。適當(dāng)使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少。如:give a speech做演講；eachother互相；pay attention to注意；come true成為現(xiàn)實(shí)；thank for doing謝謝做某事等。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用, 讓文章更出彩。