Question

假設2008年奧運會已經(jīng)開始了，你作為一名奧運會的志愿者向外國朋友介紹一下北京。80詞左右。（10分）
                                                                                         
                                                                                         
                                                                                           
                                                                                        
                                                                                         

Answer 1

Beijing is the capital of China with a long history. There are quite a lot of places if interest, such as the Great Wall, the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace and so on. As you know, Beijing lies in the north of China, so the winter here is long and it snows sometimes. Autumn is the best season to come to Beijing, because it’s cool. We also have lots of delicious foods in Beijing and Beijing Roast Duck is the most famous one. I’m glad to say that Beijing will hold the 2008 Olympic Games. This will give us the chance to let the world know more about China and Beijing. Welcome to Beijing and I’m sure you’ll enjoy it.

試題分析：這是一篇命題作文。題目中已經(jīng)給出了文章所要寫的內容，介紹北京。學生有學過相關的課文，在寫作時可運用所學知識，展開想象，可以介紹北京的景點和美食等。寫作時注意句子的完整性和表達的準確性。句子之間可適當運用連詞，使文章的結構更緊湊，邏輯更嚴密。
【亮點分析】
這篇文章表述清晰，結構完整。文中有很多有用的表達方式和句型：As you know, Beijing lies in the north of China…如你所知，北京位于中國的北方。As you know如你所知。Autumn is the best season to come to Beijing秋天是來北京的最好季節(jié)；We also have lots of delicious foods in Beijing and Beijing Roast Duck is the most famous one.北京還有很多美食，其中北京烤鴨是最有名的了。這兩個句子都用到了形容詞的最高級。