Question

Jim 是一中學(xué)生，家離學(xué)校不遠，經(jīng)常騎自行車去上學(xué)，有時步行，騎自行車大約花15分鐘，步行大約花費30分鐘，他是一名好學(xué)生，各方面都很優(yōu)秀。
（1.詞數(shù)不少于60詞；2.字跡工整； 3. 可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮）
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Answer 1

Jim is a middle school student.His home is not far from school.So he usually goes to school by bike.But he sometimes walks to school.It takes him fifteen minutes to get to school.He needs thirty minutes to school on foot.He likes his school very much.He like reading after school.He is a good student.His teachers all like him.He  does well in his subjects.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達出來。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，主語是第三人稱，寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文不僅介紹人物時注意避免句式重復(fù)而且使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實。.如His home is not far from school. It takes him fifteen minutes to get to school. He needs thirty minutes to school on foot.還用了一些連詞如so等，使文章的表達更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。