Question

同學(xué)們，眼看三年的初中生涯快過(guò)去了， 回想初中三年，一定有你經(jīng)歷過(guò)的快樂(lè)或憂傷的事，有令你感動(dòng)或難忘的同學(xué)，有關(guān)愛(ài)你伴你成長(zhǎng)的老師，父母和親人，在這畢業(yè)之際，你要對(duì)他或他們說(shuō)些什么呢/? 請(qǐng)你以“Thanks for…….. ”為題，寫一篇80詞左右的作文。（15分）
Thanks for ____________
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Answer 1

 
Thanks for my English teacher
I have been studied in middle school for three years.In a few days,I will graduate.I will never forget my English teacher.I would like to thank her for all the help she gave me.
My English teacher is a beautiful woman.She is kind but strict.She is also humorous.She always made her class interesting and active.My Spoken English was poor,and I failed the exam.She did not blame me.She helped me with my English after class.It helped a lot.My English is now better and better.She was always patient when I asked her some questions.I felt so encouraged and became more comfortable in speaking English.I hope her everything goes well.

試題分析：這是一篇話題作文，題材貼近學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)生活實(shí)際，內(nèi)容涉及對(duì)父母、親人、老師和同學(xué)的感恩�？忌�只要確定感恩主體，然后用正確的英語(yǔ)把相關(guān)內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來(lái)即可。因此，在動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真審題，盡量抓住要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般過(guò)去時(shí)態(tài)，行文時(shí)要注意人稱轉(zhuǎn)換及主謂一致問(wèn)題。同時(shí)注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文開(kāi)篇點(diǎn)題，對(duì)老師的幫助表示感謝。接著回顧過(guò)去，難忘老師的幫助和教誨。短文使用了大量的句式和短語(yǔ)，如：I would like to thank her for---、She is kind but strict、She always made her class interesting and active、She helped me with my English after class、I hope her everything goes well等，學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些常用句式及短語(yǔ)，寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。