Question

書面表達(dá) （15 分）
(A)按下列表格填空，至少5句。（5分）

Good Habit	Bad Habit
get up early	keep long fingernails

 (B)請(qǐng)根據(jù)上面表格提示以How to Keep Healthy為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文。（10分）
                                                                                           
                                                                                   
                                                                                   
                                                                                 
                                                                                 
                                                                                  
                                                                                   
                                                                                  
                                                                                
                                                                                  

Answer 1

one possible version:

Good Habit	Bad Habit
get up early	keep long fingernails
eat healthy food	eat junk food
do exercise	smoke and drink alcohol
regular check ups

Here are some things you can do to keep yourself healthy.
Having a good diet is very important. This means eating lots of different kinds of food and lots of fresh fruit and vegetables.
Have a good habit. go to bed early and get up early. Don’t keep long fingernails.And doing exercise is another good way of keeping yourself healthy. Exercise makes you fitter and helps you relax.
Some things are bad for your health, like smoking and drinking alcohol. It is better to try and give up these things or at least do them less.
It is important to have regular check ups with a dentist who will check your teeth. You can also visit an optician who will check your eyes.
You should ask your doctor for a health check once a year. The doctor will be able to help you spot other problems that you might not have noticed.

試題分析：本作文話題考查的是常見的如何保持健康的話題。本題的寫作要求是先填寫表格，后寫作。也就是考查一下構(gòu)思與落筆的過程。養(yǎng)成良好的寫作習(xí)慣。要求是包含表格所有內(nèi)容。本作文要涉及多條保持健康的建議，因此要注意全文的連貫性和整體性。多用連接上下文的副詞和短語(yǔ)。文章主要表達(dá)方式應(yīng)以提建議為主。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本例文是以列舉的方式呈現(xiàn)保持健康的建議。寫作方式新穎獨(dú)特。內(nèi)容非常完整。不僅涉及到了應(yīng)該做什么和不應(yīng)該做什么，還增加了有規(guī)律性地做檢查等預(yù)防的建議。結(jié)構(gòu)相對(duì)連貫，整體性比較強(qiáng)。語(yǔ)言簡(jiǎn)練不簡(jiǎn)單。對(duì)所學(xué)的重點(diǎn)短語(yǔ)和句式學(xué)以致用，恰到好處。