Question

請以“The changes in My Hometown”為題寫一篇短文，要求：1. 詞數100個左右；2. 條理清晰,語義連貫，句式規(guī)范，字跡工整。
我的家鄉(xiāng)揚州位于江蘇中部。它以前空氣新鮮。這些年，隨著城市的發(fā)展，它已經變成了一個現代化的城市和有名的旅游勝地。人們可以坐公交、火車或飛機進出揚州。揚州每年有成千上萬來自世界各地的游客。許多人搬進了新公寓。然而，污染變得嚴重了，政府已認識到保護環(huán)境的重要性，采取措施減輕污染。我希望我們過上更加美好的生活。
The changes in my hometown
Yangzhou , my hometown , is in the centre of Jiangsu .                              

Answer 1

The Changes in My Hometown
My hometown is Yangzhou. It lies in the middle of Jiangsu. However, there has been many changes in my hometown until now. Life has become better . The houses become larger and brighter , and more people get their own cars. Everywhere is decorated with green trees and beautiful flowers and grass. What’s more , thousands of tourists from the world come here every year, which is really splendid. But the air is getting worse and worse. I believe my hometown will become more and more developed and beautiful. Everything in it will represent the advanced science and technology. At the same time ,I will always keep it in mind that my hometown must be greater in the future.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內容表達出來。動筆前要認真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當發(fā)揮。根據材料內容可知本文主要是一般現在時態(tài)，主語是第一人稱，注意時態(tài)語時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中正確使用比較形式，注意上下文聯系緊密，符合邏輯關系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文采用樂觀者的角度與焦慮者的觀點進行對比，恰當好處運用了形容詞的比較級，從而更清晰的表達出中心思想。最后作者提出 自己的想法，使文章內函得到升華，那就是共同努力創(chuàng)建美好家園。