Question

假如你是一名新生，在第一堂英語(yǔ)課上，你用英語(yǔ)向大家作自我介紹，內(nèi)容包括以下幾點(diǎn)：
出生年月：1999年3月
性格：……
愛(ài)好：……
特長(zhǎng)：……
夢(mèng)想：……
注意：（1）詞數(shù)80個(gè)左右；開(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總數(shù)。
（2）包含所給要點(diǎn)，并結(jié)合個(gè)人適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。
Hello,everyone!
Nice to meet you! My name is Li Hua.I’m very glad to introduce myself to you.                                                   
                                                   
                                                   
                                                   
                                                   
                                                   
                                                   
                                                   
                                                   
                                                   

Answer 1

Hello, everyone!
Nice to meet you! My name is Li Hua. I’m very glad to introduce myself to you. I was born in March 1998. I used to be quiet but now I’m outgoing. I hope to make friends with you.
I have many hobbies, like reading , drawing, skating, singing, and so on. And singing is my favorite . I am good at it. So I want to be a famous singer when I grow up. But now I must study hard and get good grades .
I think I can get along well with you , and we will learn from each other and help each other. That’s all. Thanks!

試題分析：1.本文應(yīng)以第一人稱(chēng)書(shū)寫(xiě)，2.本文主要使用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。在寫(xiě)作時(shí)要做到語(yǔ)句通順，段落發(fā)明，不遺漏任何一個(gè)要點(diǎn)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文用準(zhǔn)確的語(yǔ)言表達(dá)了每一個(gè)要點(diǎn)，而且段落清晰，語(yǔ)句連貫。