Question

4月23日是“世界讀書日”（the World Book and Copyright Day）， 你將代表學(xué)校參加全市舉辦的英文演講比賽，請你就以下要點(diǎn)寫一篇演講稿。
寫作要點(diǎn)：
每年4月23日人們舉辦各種活動(dòng)，鼓勵(lì)更多的人熱愛讀書；
許多名著至今仍然流行，例如，孔子的論著（Counfucius’works）現(xiàn)在仍被很多人閱讀；
我把大部分空閑時(shí)間花在閱讀名著上，他們對(duì)我的思想產(chǎn)生很大影響；
我常跟家人和朋友分享讀書的樂趣；
我最喜愛讀的書是……， 因?yàn)椤��?br />寫作要求：
詞數(shù)80左右；
短文的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
文中需包括所有寫作要點(diǎn)，但不要逐字翻譯，可適當(dāng)加入過渡詞句，使短文通順，連貫；
文中不能出現(xiàn)考生真實(shí)姓名和學(xué)校名稱。
Good morning, everyone! Today is the World Book and Copyright Day. It started in 1995
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I wish you will enjoy reading as much as I do. Thank you!

Answer 1

Good morning, everyone! Today is the World Book and Copyright Day. It started in 1995. In order to encourage more people to read more books, all kinds of activities are held on April 23rd. Till now many famous books are popular, such as Counfucius’ works by Counfucius are still read by many people . I spend most of my free time reading famous books which affect me greatly. I often share my happiness of reading books with my family and friends. Of all the books, I like the Long March best. From the book I can know about our history better.
I wish you will enjoy reading as much as I do . Thank you.

試題分析：這是一篇鼓勵(lì)更多的人熱愛讀書的演講稿，首先要用正確的格式去寫，會(huì)用一些短語，了解英語的句子結(jié)構(gòu)與漢語的不同，需要平時(shí)對(duì)課本上的課文要正確地理解，會(huì)仿照課文的句子寫出正確的英語句子，這里是在演講稿中介紹一些名著，例如，孔子的論著（Counfucius’works）和他們對(duì)我的思想產(chǎn)生的影響。介紹一本自己最喜歡的書，并且說明原因。平時(shí)的生活情況，所以注意用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)，用第一人稱來敘述。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】短文用了一些短語和固定句式，為文章增色不少，如：in order to等，為了上下文的銜接還用了一些過渡詞如：such as等。