Question

假如你叫周欣，下周五是你最好的朋友凱特（Kate）的生日，你決定給北京廣播電臺(tái)英語(yǔ)欄目組的主持人寫封郵件，希望在節(jié)目中送上你對(duì)凱特的生日祝福，以及歌曲“You’re my best friend”。
要點(diǎn)提示：1．凱特如何幫助過(guò)你；
2．你對(duì)凱特的幫助表示感謝；
3．送上你對(duì)她的生日祝福。
要求：1．70詞左右（開(kāi)頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)）；
2．語(yǔ)句通順，語(yǔ)法正確。
Dear presenter,
I’m writing this letter because I want to thank my best friend Kate and send my best wishes in your programme．
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So much thanks．
Yours，
Zhou Xin                               

Answer 1

Dear presenter，
I’m writing this letter because I want to thank my best friend Kate and send my best wishes in your programme．Kate helps me a lot in my school subjects，especially English．She not only tells me how I should learn it，but also talks with me in English to improve my speaking．I’m very lucky to have Kate as my friend．Next Friday will be her birthday．I’d like to thank her for helping me and I wish her happy birthday．I also have a song for her called，“You’re my best friend，”and tell her that she will always be my best friend．
So much thanks．
Yours,
Zhou Xin

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文作者先寫自己的個(gè)人情況，包括所在學(xué)校、星座、性格、愛(ài)好，然后寫自己的煩惱，最后請(qǐng)求幫助。全文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，例如 a lot,not only...but also,talks with,thank  for, in English等短語(yǔ)，文中還用到了賓語(yǔ)從句how I should learn it，that she will always be my best friend；固定句型I’d like to do.文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。