Question

造紙術(shù)不僅是中國(guó)古代的偉大發(fā)明，同時(shí)也促進(jìn)了世界文明的發(fā)展。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面表格里所提示的內(nèi)容，以O(shè)ne of the Most Helpful Inventions為題寫(xiě)一篇短文。詞數(shù)60-80之間。

Invention	Paper
Time	Western Han dynasty
Inventor	Cai Lun
Materials	bark, ropes, rags and so on
Uses	writing, painting, printing books and so on

One of the Most Helpful Inventions
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Answer 1

One of the Most Helpful Inventions
As we all know, paper is one of the four most important inventions in ancient China. It was invented in the Western Han dynasty by Cai Lun. After he had done many experiments. Cai Lun made paper with bark, ropes, rags and so on. It is a great contribution to the world.
Nowadays, paper is very useful in our work, study and daily life. We can use it to write, paint, print books and so on.
Thanks for the invention of paper. It has made our life more colorful.

試題分析：這是一篇表格作文。本文要求按照所給的題目結(jié)合表格中的內(nèi)容完成這篇介紹造紙業(yè)的發(fā)展及對(duì)社會(huì)的重大貢獻(xiàn)，我們要用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z(yǔ)言把所列舉的內(nèi)容準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)出來(lái)。寫(xiě)作中要包含發(fā)明項(xiàng)、發(fā)明時(shí)間、發(fā)明者及原材料和用途等幾個(gè)方面進(jìn)行陳述，表達(dá)出恰當(dāng)?shù)挠^點(diǎn)等。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱(chēng)主要是第三人稱(chēng)，注意并列連詞的使用及主謂一致問(wèn)題。寫(xiě)作中注意上下文的過(guò)度，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文簡(jiǎn)明、扼要地闡明了造紙技術(shù)對(duì)于社會(huì)的貢獻(xiàn)及其發(fā)展，并包含了表格中所要求的基本信息。其中使用了一些固定句式和短語(yǔ)，包含定語(yǔ)從句及被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)的準(zhǔn)確使用為文章增色不少.如As we all know，It was invented in the Western Han dynasty by Cai Lun，a great contribution to，made our life more colorful，and so on.學(xué)習(xí)中再注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ)，寫(xiě)作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性，更富有條理。