Question

假如你是北京陽光中學(xué)八年級學(xué)生Nancy。以My school life為題，寫一篇短文向你在英國的筆友介紹你的學(xué)校生活。
要求：1.提示內(nèi)容必須要寫。
2.不要逐句翻譯，可適當發(fā)揮，注意意思要連貫。
3.詞數(shù)80字左右，開頭結(jié)尾不計入總詞數(shù)。
要點： 1．上午8點開始，下午4點結(jié)束。
2. 一天6節(jié)課，學(xué)習(xí)各種科目，如：語文，英語，數(shù)學(xué)，地理，美術(shù)……
3.學(xué)校有餐廳，中午在學(xué)校餐廳吃飯，飯后同學(xué)互相聊天或聽音樂。
4.課后作業(yè)不多,有時間進行課外活動，到圖書館借書，操場做運動。
5.每周五下午參加社團活動(club)，最喜歡the Reading Club,可以從家?guī)�書，可以和同學(xué)討論書籍。
My   school life   
Hi,I’m  Nancy. I am a Year 8 student in Sunshine Middle School. Now let me tell you something about my school life.
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Answer 1

 
I always have fun at school.
My school starts at 8:00 a.m. and finishes at 4:00 p.m. .We have six lessons every day. At school, We learn all kinds of subjects, such as Chinese, English, Maths, Geography, Art  and so on. 
There is a dining hall in our school whrer we have lunch After lunch, we often chat with each other or listen to music. Because we don’t have too much homework after class, we have time for after-school activities. We can borrow books from our library or play sports in the playground.
Every Friday afternoon, we go to clubs. My favourite club is the Reading Club.
We can bring in books from home. We can also discuss the books with our classmates.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文作者向在英國的筆友介紹自己的學(xué)校生活。全文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)。
【亮點說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，例如at school, all kinds of,such as,and so on.,have lunch ,after lunch,chat with each other,listen to music,after class,after-school activities.play sports , go to clubs, bring in等短語，文中還用到了定語從句There is a dining hall in our school whrer we have lunch ; 原因狀語從句Because we don’t have too much homework after class,。文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達流暢。