Question

假如你是Zhang Lin，你的筆友Li Hua來(lái)信詢(xún)問(wèn)你學(xué)英語(yǔ)的方法。請(qǐng)你給他寫(xiě)一封回信，并給他提一些學(xué)好英語(yǔ)的建議(至少兩條建議)�；匦诺拈_(kāi)頭已給出，不計(jì)入總字?jǐn)?shù)。
Dear Li Hua,
Thanks for your letter. You asked me __________________________________
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Yours sincerely,
Zhang Lin

Answer 1

Dear Li Hua,
Thanks for your letter. You asked me how to learn English well and here are some of my suggestions. First of all, practice English every day. There are various aspects of English learning, including speaking, reading, listening and writing. It doesn’t necessarily mean that every aspect should be paid attention to each day. You can choose one or more as long asyou have time and energy. Next, build a solid vocabulary base. Little can be done to improve your English without enough vocabulary. What’s more, watch English movies. It’s hard to keep learning interest by only focusing on textbooks. Movies can add color to your learning and provide real environment for practice as well. I hope what I have suggested above will be of great help to you.
Yours sincerely,
Zhang Lin

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。要求以書(shū)信的方式總結(jié)學(xué)習(xí)英語(yǔ)的方法和建議，實(shí)質(zhì)就是一篇“論如何學(xué)英語(yǔ)”的議論文，提出大于等于兩個(gè)以上建議即可，最后勿忘加上書(shū)信結(jié)尾的客套話(huà)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】
亮點(diǎn)一：不定式與疑問(wèn)副詞how搭配作為ask的賓語(yǔ)，用法等于how you could learn English well的賓語(yǔ)從句。
亮點(diǎn)二：that引導(dǎo)的賓語(yǔ)從句中用pay attention to的被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，to不可省略；
亮點(diǎn)三：as long as引導(dǎo)的條件狀語(yǔ)從句。
亮點(diǎn)四：little與without兩個(gè)詞在句中起到“雙重否定”作用，強(qiáng)調(diào)了詞匯基礎(chǔ)的重要。
亮點(diǎn)五：focus on與上文的pay attention to是同義詞組，在寫(xiě)作中要多使用同義替換，體現(xiàn)詞匯多樣性。
亮點(diǎn)六：what引導(dǎo)從句起到兩個(gè)作用--大賓從小主從。
亮點(diǎn)七：be of great help代替helpful，用名詞詞組更顯正式。