Question

根據(jù)提示寫(xiě)一封辭謝信。Tom邀請(qǐng)你參加他這周日的生日聚會(huì)，但你的父母出差要到下個(gè)月回來(lái)，奶奶又生病在床需要人照顧。你也需要為將要到來(lái)的英語(yǔ)考試做準(zhǔn)備，因此無(wú)法前去參加生日聚會(huì)。感到很抱歉，只好寫(xiě)信辭謝。要求：40~~60字。
Dear Tom,
Thank you very much for inviting me to your birthday party. I’d love to
                                                              
                                                              
                                                              
                                                              
                                                              
                                                              

Answer 1

I’d love to go but I can’t. My parents are out on business. They are coming back next month. And now I have to look after my grandmother because she is ill in bed. And I also need to study for my coming English exam. I am very sorry but I can’t go to your party. Thank you for asking me. I hope you can have a good time.

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們寫(xiě)一篇辭謝信，在題目中有詳細(xì)的資料，我們需要把這些資料用正確的英語(yǔ)翻譯出來(lái)。寫(xiě)作時(shí)首先要注意語(yǔ)言的委婉，因?yàn)檫@是拒絕別人的邀請(qǐng)。拒絕的原因有兩個(gè)，一是父母出差不在家，要照顧生病的奶奶；二是要為即將到來(lái)的考試做準(zhǔn)備。文章中要把這兩層意思表述清楚。最后要寫(xiě)好信的結(jié)尾。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這是一篇比較優(yōu)秀的范文。文章的內(nèi)容完整，結(jié)構(gòu)清晰，表述準(zhǔn)確，語(yǔ)言恰當(dāng)。首先對(duì)別人的邀請(qǐng)表示了感謝；然后把不能去參加聚會(huì)的原因表示清楚，這也是文章的主體，表達(dá)得很清楚。最后文章的結(jié)尾比較好，再次對(duì)別人的邀請(qǐng)表示感謝，并對(duì)別人表示祝福，希望他們玩得高興。這個(gè)結(jié)尾比較適當(dāng)，非常適合這種場(chǎng)合。