Question

約翰(John)過去學習不太好，父母為此經常生氣，他甚至想放棄學習。但在老師和同學們的幫助下，他下決心努力學習�，F(xiàn)在他變了很多，各科成績都很好，并且成了班上的好學生。請以Never give up為題，用英語寫一篇80詞左右的短文，號召大家不要輕言放棄，要變問題為挑戰(zhàn)，勇敢面對。(語句通順，字跡工整)
                                                                               
                                                                                     
                                                                                     
                                                                                     
                                                                                     
                                                                                     

Answer 1

The student John did not study hard and the grades were so bad .And his parents were angry with him. Even he made his mind to give up his study, but he has made some change and the grades in all subjects are very good with the help of the teacher and his classmates. Suprisely, he has become the best student in his class. From that we must study hard and not say the words “give up”. We can meet the difficulty and make the challenge.

試題分析：在寫作時可分三步進行：1，審題構思。通過審題，確定文章體裁和時態(tài)。本篇作文是記敘文，主要寫約翰過去學習不好，甚至想放棄，后來在老師和同學的幫助下發(fā)生了很大變化，故主體時態(tài)是一般過去時和現(xiàn)在完成時，同時要注意不能遺漏提供的要點，并可以適當發(fā)揮。2，列舉要點not study hard， give up his study，with the help of the teacher and his classmates，become the best等等。3，連詞成句、連句成篇。在進行此步驟時，應注意使用一些連接過渡詞，以使文章更流暢、自然。
【亮點說明】本文語句平實，但流暢自然，完全表達了題目中的要點。