Question

你的好友Tom邀請你本周末參加他的周末派對。假定你是陳蕾，請你回一封郵件，婉言拒絕他的邀請， 根據(jù)你的日程表說明原因，其中周六理由已給出，周日可作適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。字?jǐn)?shù)80字左右。

weekend schedule
Saturday	Sunday
Morning: have an English class prepare for the math test	Morning:……
Afternoon: go to the dentist	Afternoon:……
From:	ChenLei@162.com
Subject:	Sorry,but I'm not available.
Hi_____,
Thanks so much for your invitation. I'd love to come to the party, but…
yours,
________

Answer 1

Hi,Tom,
Thanks so much for your invitation. I'd love to come to the party, but I’m very sorry,I’m not available.On Saturday morning,I have an English class and I have to prepare for the math test.In the afternoon,I must go to the dentist.On Sunday morning,I have to clean my room and wash my clothes.In the afternoon,I must go shopping with my mother.I can take things for her.
yours,
Chen Lei

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文所給材料比較詳細(xì)，我們要做的就是用正確的英語把這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。動筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不可遺漏要點，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，主語是第一人稱，注意時態(tài)與時間狀語的搭配及主謂一致問題。寫作中適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點說明】這篇短文使用了大量的固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少，如： Thanks so much for your invitation.非常感謝你的邀請，I'd love to come我愿意來，On Saturday morning 在星期六上午have an English class上一節(jié)英語課，prepare for the math test，In the afternoon在下午，go to the dentist去看牙醫(yī)，go shopping with my mother和媽媽一起購物等,學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié)，牢記一些固定句式及短語，寫作時就可以適當(dāng)引用，使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性、更富有條理。