Question

假設(shè)你是初中學(xué)生李華。近來(lái)，學(xué)生在網(wǎng)上看書(online reading)的風(fēng)氣越來(lái)越盛行。對(duì)此，同學(xué)們有不同的看法。請(qǐng)根據(jù)下面的提示，給某英語(yǔ)報(bào)社的編輯寫一封信，說(shuō)說(shuō)同學(xué)們的觀點(diǎn)，并談?wù)勛约旱目捶ā?br />

Some students’ ideas	Your ideas
1 without spending much money.	1
2 On hot or cold days, not have to go out	2
3 Share with friends easily	3

要求：1.必須包括提示中的全部?jī)?nèi)容，自己的觀點(diǎn)可以自由發(fā)揮；
2詞數(shù)：80左右。
Dear editor，
I’m a middle school student named Li Hua.  Recently, many students choose to read books online. I’m writing to tell you about students’ different opinions.
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Answer 1

Dear editor，
I’m a middle school student named Li Hua. Recently, many students choose to read books online. I’m writing to tell you about students’ different opinions.
Some students think they can get any books they want without spending much money. Some websites provide online reading free. Then, they don’t have to go out to a book store or library, especially on hot summer days. At the same time, they can share their favorite books with friend easily.
In my opinion, nowadays, the computer is more and more popular, it is a good thing for students to read something that is good for study. Besides, we can read books at any time if necessary. If you are complaining about your heavy books , why not use your computer from now on?

試題分析：這是一篇表格作文。本文要求結(jié)合表格中的內(nèi)容完成這篇書信，我們要用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z(yǔ)言把表格中的內(nèi)容準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)出來(lái)，并表達(dá)出自己的觀點(diǎn)。寫作中要包含其他同學(xué)的看法、并且要表明自己的觀點(diǎn)等方面進(jìn)行陳述等。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱主要是第三、一人稱，寫作中要注意并列連詞的使用及主謂一致問題。寫作中注意上下文的過度，要符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文簡(jiǎn)明、扼要地闡明了大家對(duì)這一事件的看法，并表達(dá)出來(lái)自己的個(gè)人觀點(diǎn)。其中使用了一些固定句式和短語(yǔ)，包含賓語(yǔ)從句和定語(yǔ)從句的準(zhǔn)確使用為文章增色不少.如Some students think they can get any books they want，don’t have to，share sth with sb，文中過渡語(yǔ)何連接詞的使用也很規(guī)范，如Then, At the same time, In my opinion, Besides, 學(xué)習(xí)中再注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語(yǔ),寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。