Question

假如你是Lily, 你身體很健康，請以How to Keep Healthy為題寫一篇80詞左右的短文，向你的同學介紹介紹你的日常保健方法。（6分）
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Answer 1

How to Keep Healthy
If we want to keep our bodies healthy, we must have a good habit. We should get up and go to bed early and sleep at least eight hours every day. Do more exercise, such as walking, swimming, playing balls and so on. We should also eat healthy food —— more fruit and vegetables and less meat. If you don’t feel well, you’d better see a doctor at once. And we should wash our hands before meals and drink enough boiled water every day. It’s necessary for our health.
We should not throw litter about, keep long fingernails and smoke, etc. It’s also very important.

試題分析：本文已經(jīng)給出了寫作話題，動筆前要先平常自己的日常保健的做法，列出要點然后按照要點適當發(fā)揮，寫作中，應注意描述的全面性，盡量將提示的內(nèi)容利用上；結合材料內(nèi)容，可知本文主要是第一人稱，用一般現(xiàn)在時進行敘述。語言的表述應該符合語法的結構，造句應該符合英語的表達習慣。適當使用連詞，做到上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關系。
【亮點說明】有些句子使用了一些固定句式和短語，為文章增色不少.如: get up；,it’s a good place to live and study；go to bed；had better等。還用了一些連詞如：if和and等。提醒學生學習中注意總結,牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時就可以適當引用,使文章的表達更有邏輯性,更富有條理性。