Question

初級(jí)寫作  (本題一節(jié)，計(jì)15分）你們班的交流生Mary 來(lái)自英國(guó)。本周六她要在家舉辦生日聚會(huì)，邀請(qǐng)你去參加。 請(qǐng)你根據(jù)邀請(qǐng)函和提示，適當(dāng)發(fā)揮， 寫一篇80詞左右的信婉言拒絕她的邀請(qǐng)。

Birthday Party! Please come to my 13th birthday party.          Saturday, October 24th, 5:00 p.m. My house, No. 25, West Street.                                  Mary

提示： 1. 上午參加英語(yǔ)競(jìng)賽；2. 下午去足球俱樂部；3. 晚上去看電影。

Dear Mary, Thank you for your invitation.                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                                 I wish you a happy birthday. Mike

Answer 1

 

Dear Mary, Thank you for your invitation. I’d really love to,but I’m afaid I couldn’t. I won’t be free that day. First,I will take part in the English contest in the morning. Then ,I will go to the Football Club  in the afternoon. Finally, I will go to the cinema with my aunt  in the evening. She just came back from New York a few days ago. And she will leave for New York the day after tomorrow. I wish you a happy birthday. Mike

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文作者主要寫信拒絕邀請(qǐng)，主要用一般將來(lái)時(shí)。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中使用了非常好的短語(yǔ)和句子為文章增色不少，例如take part in,in the morning,in the afternoon,in the evening,go to the cinema,came back from,a few days ago,leave for ,the day after tomorrow等短語(yǔ)，委婉語(yǔ)氣 I’d really love to,but I’m afaid I couldn’t.還用到first，then ，finally。文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。