Question

假如你是李華，你的美國筆友Alan準(zhǔn)備下周來中國，他向你詢問有關(guān)中國的禮儀。請根據(jù)表格中的提示用英語給他寫一封電子郵件，告訴他相關(guān)情況。

見面	要握手，可談?wù)摵芏嘣掝}，包括年齡等。
做客	被邀請時(shí)，要準(zhǔn)時(shí)到達(dá)，最好帶一件小禮物； 收到禮物后，要等客人離開后再打開。
就餐	用筷子吃飯，不要用筷子敲（tap）碗； 吃飽后，要等所有人都吃完了才能離開餐桌。

要求：1.90詞左右，郵件的開頭和結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
2.可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮，以使行文連貫。
Dear Alan，
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I’d like you to drop by my home whenever you like.
Have a good time!
Sincerely,
LiHua

Answer 1

Dear Alan，
I’m glad to receive your e-mail. Now I’d like to tell you something about the manners in China.
When people meet each other, they often shake hands. Chinese people talk about many topics, even including their ages. Besides, if you’re invited, you are supposed to arrive on time. And you should take a small present with you. If you receive a present, you should open it until your guest leaves your home. As for the table manners, you are supposed to eat with chopsticks. And you’d better not tap the bowl when you are eating. When you are full, wait until everyone finishes eating.
I’d like you to drop by my home whenever you like.
Have a good time!
Sincerely,
LiHua

試題分析：這是一篇表格作文。本文要求按照題目要求結(jié)合表格中的內(nèi)容完成這篇電子郵件，我們要用恰當(dāng)?shù)恼Z言把所列舉的內(nèi)容準(zhǔn)確地表達(dá)出來。寫作中要包含中國的生活社交禮儀，包含見面、做客及就餐等三個(gè)方面。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)，人稱主要是第二人稱，注意并列連詞的使用及主謂一致問題。寫作中注意上下文的過度，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文準(zhǔn)確、充分地闡明了中國禮儀的幾個(gè)小的方面，并包含了表格中所要求的信息。其中使用了一些固定句式和短語，包含非謂語動(dòng)詞和狀語從句的準(zhǔn)確使用為文章增色不少.如even including their ages，shake hands，finishes eating，are supposed to，If you receive a present, 學(xué)習(xí)中再注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理。