Question

暑假就要來(lái)了，你打算怎樣度過(guò)你的假期呢？請(qǐng)你根據(jù)自己的實(shí)際情況談?wù)勛约旱挠?jì)劃。
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Answer 1

A plan for the coming summer vacation
The summer vacation is coming. During the vacation, I’m going to have a good rest and learn to relax myself. I will get better results when I feel relaxed. Also, I plan to read some books because reading books is interesting and I can get much knowledge from books as well. I will spend as much time as possible helping my parents do some housework. I will take part in some social activities so that I can know the society better. If possible, I'd like to go to Shanghai for a visit.
I’m sure I will have a pleasant summer vacation.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。注意時(shí)態(tài)，人稱，和固定詞組搭配，同時(shí)將題目所給的材料要用上。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇短文不僅注意避免句式重復(fù)而且使用了大量的的短語(yǔ)，可見該生英語(yǔ)功底扎實(shí)。.如I will get better results when I feel relaxed.， Also，as much time as possible，take part in，If possible，等使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。