Question

請(qǐng)你寫一篇作文，描寫你的家鄉(xiāng)近幾年來的變化。從馬路，建筑物，商店，旅游等方面進(jìn)行描述。(不少于80字)
1.過去，我的家鄉(xiāng)是個(gè)貧窮的小鎮(zhèn)，但是河水清澈，空氣清新。人們住在低矮的屋子里。人們常常步行或騎自行車去鎮(zhèn)里。2. 在過去的幾年中， 我的家鄉(xiāng)發(fā)生了很大變化。多數(shù)人搬進(jìn)了公寓。馬路變寬了，超市也多了。3. 人們可以坐公共汽車或打的去鎮(zhèn)里。但是空氣不如以前新鮮了，樹也沒以前多了。4.人們意識(shí)到保護(hù)環(huán)境是很重要的。

Answer 1

In the past, my hometown was very small. People used to live a poor life. The houses used to be old and small. The traffic used to be not convenient, but the mountains were greener, water much cleaner. They enjoyed a clearer sky .Now great changes have taken place in my hometown. People live a better life. Their houses are large and bright. Many people have their own cars. People can take a bus or a taxi to town. But the air is not as fresh as before, so are the trees. Now we all know protecting the environment is very important. I’m sure my hometown will become better and better in the future.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。要求介紹家鄉(xiāng)的變化。根據(jù)內(nèi)容可能會(huì)用到過去時(shí)態(tài)（used to do 過去常常）和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)。根據(jù)提綱要求進(jìn)行描述就可以了。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文要點(diǎn)敘述全，幾乎沒有語言錯(cuò)誤，句式變化靈活。語言豐富。例如; In the past .so are the trees. better and better,等