根據(jù)下面提示,以“Believe in Yourself and You Will Succeed”為題寫一篇短文,詞數(shù): 100左右。
提示:
1. 學(xué)習(xí)中遇到的困難;
2. 如何克服困難的;
3. 從中學(xué)到了什么。
Believe in Yourself and You Will Succeed
                                               
                                               
                                       
                                                                                 
                                                                                          

Everyone will face some difficulties in his or her life or study. What should we do when we are in trouble? I think the most important is that we should believe in ourselves. I still remember that when I began learning English, I found it difficult to learn it well. The words were difficult to remember, and the grammars were not easy to understand. Besides, the worst thing was that I was afraid of speaking English aloud, especially in public. I was always afraid of making mistakes. The result is that I couldn’t learn English well. Then, my teacher and friends encouraged me and told me that I must believe in myself and needn’t be afraid of making mistakes.  So, I tried my best to learn English, especially practice speaking English. I still make some mistakes now but I don’t think it is a big problem. Now, my English is being improved day by day. From this experience I know that if we believe in ourselves, we will succeed.

試題分析:這是篇命題作文,題目給出了寫作的標(biāo)題以及內(nèi)容提示,寫作中要緊扣提示,注意要點(diǎn)的完整性。在對(duì)事件進(jìn)行描述時(shí),注意時(shí)態(tài)的準(zhǔn)確使用和主謂一致。可適當(dāng)?shù)氖褂靡恍┻B詞來增加文章的邏輯性。另外可適當(dāng)使用一些復(fù)合句,如學(xué)過的定語從句,賓語從句等。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇作文結(jié)構(gòu)完整,表述準(zhǔn)確流利。文中出現(xiàn)了一些復(fù)合句,使表述更緊湊,如:I still remember that when I began learning English, I found it difficult to learn it well.我仍然記得當(dāng)我剛開始學(xué)英語時(shí),我發(fā)現(xiàn)很難學(xué)好。That引導(dǎo)了賓語從句。Besides, the worst thing was that I was afraid of speaking English aloud, especially in public.另外,最糟糕的事情是害怕大聲說英語,尤其是在公共場(chǎng)合。句中that引導(dǎo)了表語從句。另外,文中使用了一些連詞,如and, besides, so 等等。
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