Question

假設(shè)你叫王華，你的好朋友李林同學(xué)擬參加學(xué)校新一屆學(xué)生會(huì)主席競(jìng)選,你認(rèn)為他具有成為優(yōu)秀學(xué)生會(huì)主席的品質(zhì)和才能,并了解他的任后計(jì)劃,決定寫一封推薦信推薦他。

基本情況	十六歲,出生在泰州；是九年級(jí)3班的班長(zhǎng)。
能力品質(zhì)	學(xué)習(xí)認(rèn)真，長(zhǎng)大后想成為科學(xué)家，現(xiàn)在正在努力去實(shí)現(xiàn)夢(mèng)想; 禮貌、樂于助人......           心靈手巧，善于制作東西，制作的機(jī)器人會(huì)……
任后計(jì)劃	美化校園，使它干凈整潔;組織慈善活動(dòng)……

要求：1．短文應(yīng)包括所提供的所有內(nèi)容，特別是發(fā)揮部分。
2．詞數(shù)：100詞左右。開頭結(jié)尾已給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)。
3．文中不得提及所在學(xué)校及本人姓名。
Dear Sir or Madam:
I’m writing to recommend my classmate Li Lin as the new chairperson of the Students’ Union. If he can be the new chairperson, I think Li Lin can be an excellent chairperson. I hope you can agree with me.
Yours sincerely
Wang Hua

Answer 1

Dear Sir or Madam:
I’m writing to recommend my classmate Li Lin as the new chairperson of the Students’ Union.He is sixteen year old, He was born in Taizhou. Now he is the mointor of Class Three, Grade Nine. He studies so carefully that he oftn get prizes. When he grops up he wants to be a scientist.To achieve his dream,he tries his best to learn all the subjects well. Also , he is polite to others and is ready to help people in need. He thinks helping others makes him feel good. besides above, he is good at making things. The robot he made can sing and dance. We all think he is creative and smart.
If he can be the new chairperson, he will make our school more beautiful and cleaner. And he will set up a charity to raise money for the people who need help.
I think Li Lin can be an excellent chairperson. I hope you can agree with me.
Yours sincerely
Wang Hua

試題分析：這是一篇利用圖表的給材料作文。要求介紹王華的優(yōu)秀品質(zhì)和才能，主要用第三人稱，和一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文不僅介紹人物時(shí)注意避免句式重復(fù)而且使用了大量的的短語，可見該生英語功底扎實(shí)。.如so …that…, To achieve his dream， tries his best to ，is ready to, besides above. The robot he made can sing and dance定語從句等，使文章的表達(dá)更豐富，更有邏輯性，更富有條理。