Question

兩個月前，膠東在線對我校初四學生畢業(yè)后的人生規(guī)劃進行了一次問卷調(diào)查。請根據(jù)圖表中提供的數(shù)據(jù)信息，寫一篇100-120詞的調(diào)查報告，并結合實際談談你的觀點和畢業(yè)后的人生理想。
要求：1.行文不得出現(xiàn)真實姓名和校名； 2.開頭已給出，不計入總詞數(shù)。

Two months ago, Jiaodong Online made a survey what junior Grade 4 students would do after graduation. Here is the result.
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Answer 1

One possible version：
Two months ago, Jiaodong Online made a survey what junior Grade 4 students would do after graduation. Here is the result.
65% of us hope to be admitted to the senior school. About 20% would like to learn useful skills at technical schools so as to get jobs easily after graduation. And 10% of the students will find jobs to make money to support their families. Only 5% are not quite sure about their aims. I think they should make it clear what to do next.
In my opinion, we teenagers should have a design for our future life. Different students have different aims and of course they may change with the time.
My dream is to be a doctor to serve the patients. So, I am determined to work hard at all my lessons so that I can enter Beijing Medical University. I’m ready for a hard but colorful senior school life.

試題分析：
這是一篇圖表作文，根據(jù)對我校初四學生畢業(yè)后的人生規(guī)劃調(diào)查表，寫一篇100-120詞的調(diào)查報告，并結合實際談談你的觀點和畢業(yè)后的人生理想。本文應該一般現(xiàn)在時態(tài)，人稱為單數(shù)第一，三人稱，注意主謂一致問題，寫作中注意一些常見句式的應用和多種句式交替運用。還有敘述順序，符合邏輯關系。
【亮點說明】本文結構緊湊，語言簡練。 第一段對調(diào)查報告的分析。用百分數(shù)做主語，看其代表的名詞。這里代表students，所以謂語用復數(shù)形式。對同一個意思用了不同的表達方式。如hope to和would like to。還有make it clear what to do next形式賓語的用法。第二段發(fā)明自己的看法，In my opinion。Different students have different aims.不同的人有不同的觀點。動詞不定式作表語；so that如此…..以至于。get ready for準備。等這些詞組和短語、句子的運用也讓文章增色不少。