Question

根據(jù)所給圖畫(huà)，用英語(yǔ)寫一篇80詞左右的短文。要求完整敘述圖畫(huà)內(nèi)容。

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Answer 1

One day, Linda was on her way home. She saw a man ride a bike in front of him. Suddenly, a car ran against him at a high speed. The man fell to the ground and was hurt badly. But the driver didn’t stop to save the man. Instead, he drove his car away quickly. Linda ran fast to catch up with the car. And she called the police. Soon the policeman came. He scolded the driver. At last, the driver apologized to the man.

試題分析：這是一篇看圖作文，這樣的作文我們必須要仔細(xì)觀察圖片，看清圖片想要表達(dá)的意思，要對(duì)每一張圖片所 表達(dá)的內(nèi)容有正確的理解。這是寫好作文的前提。通過(guò)觀察可知，這四張圖片講述了一次交通事故，是一個(gè)騎自行車的人和一輛汽車。從圖上可以看出，是這輛汽車的速度太快了。而且，這名司機(jī)在撞人后還逃跑了。所以這些細(xì)節(jié)的內(nèi)容我們要表達(dá)清楚，將這個(gè)事故發(fā)生的時(shí)間、地點(diǎn)、人物、原因、結(jié)果等交代明白，完整的表達(dá)出來(lái)。通過(guò)分析可知，這篇短文我們應(yīng)該主要使用一般過(guò)去時(shí)，所以要注意每句話中的動(dòng)詞，都要用過(guò)去式的形式。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】這篇作文寫得還是比較優(yōu)秀的。它以Linda為角度，把看到的一場(chǎng)交通事故敘述了下來(lái)。首先，作者交代了事故發(fā)生的時(shí)間和地點(diǎn)，One day, Linda was on her way home；接下來(lái)是這次事故中的雙方以及事故的過(guò)程，She saw a man ride a bike in front of him. Suddenly, a car ran against him at a high speed. The man fell to the ground and was hurt badly.；然后是司機(jī)逃跑，Instead, he drove his car away quickly，這個(gè)句子中作者使用了一個(gè)單詞instead，運(yùn)用非常準(zhǔn)確。最后是這次交通事故的處理，And she called the police. Soon the policeman came. He scolded the driver. At last, the driver apologized to the man。這篇作文對(duì)這次事件的敘述比較完整，表達(dá)比較準(zhǔn)確。