Question

根據(jù)以下信息寫一篇70詞左右的短文：（短文需包含以下內(nèi)容，但不要逐句翻譯）
1、我名叫Tom，13歲，我家離學(xué)校很遠(yuǎn)，每天乘公交車到校要花費(fèi)我大約20分鐘，我通常在學(xué)校吃中餐。
2、我非常喜歡音樂，我會(huì)打鼓，且打得很好，我想?yún)⒓酉聜�(gè)月學(xué)校舉行的音樂節(jié)。
3、每天晚飯后，我跟父母散步約1小時(shí)，然后做一個(gè)小時(shí)的作業(yè)，我大約在9點(diǎn)鐘睡覺。
參考詞匯：music festival音樂節(jié)       
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Answer 1

Hello, everyone, my name is Tom. I want to share with you some things. My home is far away from school, every day I spend about twenty minutes by bus to school, because of the back and forth from school too much trouble, so I usually eat lunch at school.
In addition, I also like music very much,  I play the drums, and played very well. I want to exercise myself, So I want to join the school music festival help next month. In extracurricular time, every day after dinner, I’ll walk with my parents. About 1 hour, and then do an hour of homework, then I will be about to go to bed at none O’clock.

試題分析：這是一篇給材料作文。本文給出了一些要點(diǎn)。我們要做的就是用正確的英語把要點(diǎn)表達(dá)出來，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮想象說出自己的觀點(diǎn)。動(dòng)筆前要認(rèn)真閱讀材料，不要遺漏要點(diǎn)，并適當(dāng)發(fā)揮。根據(jù)材料內(nèi)容可知本文主要是用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)來寫，要注意主謂一致等問題。寫作中要適當(dāng)使用連詞，注意上下文聯(lián)系緊密，符合邏輯關(guān)系。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】這篇短文多次使用連接詞and、so，以及短語because of、too much trouble等等，為文章增色不少。學(xué)習(xí)中注意總結(jié),牢記一些固定句式及短語,寫作時(shí)就可以適當(dāng)引用,使文章的表達(dá)更有邏輯性,更富有條理.