Question

假設(shè)你是Mary，你的朋友Rose想從北京到你居住的海濱城市來旅游。下面是一張示意圖和你給她發(fā)的E-mail（電子郵件），告訴她怎樣到你家，并且告訴她每天都能步行去海濱玩請把郵件補充完整。

Dear Rose, 　　I'm very glad you are coming to visit me. Now I will tell you how to get to my  71  After you get off the  72  at the station, you can  73  a number 8 bus to Yingbin Road. The bus stop is near my home. Or you can take a taxi（出租車）if you like. That's much easier. 　　By the way, it's not very far  74  my home to the beach（海濱）. So we can go there  75   every day. I hope you will have a good time here. Write to me soon. 　　                                                     Best wishes, 　　                                                     Mary

Answer 1

Dear Rose.
I’m very glad you are coming to visit me. Now I well you how to get to my home. After you get off the train at the station, you can take a number 8 bus to Yingbin Road. The bus stop is near my home. Or you can take a taxi if you like. That’s much easier.
By the way, it’s not very far from my home to the beach. So we can go there on foot every day. I hope you will have a good time here. Write to me soon.
Best wishes,
Mary

試題分析：這篇作文要求我們根據(jù)題目中給出的具體情景，寫一封電子郵件。這里有一個示意圖，圖中告訴我們這封電子郵件的主要內(nèi)容。從示意圖上我們可以看到，Rose做火車從北京來到Mary所在的城市，然后可以乘坐公共汽車去Mary的家。從Mary的家到海邊并不遠(yuǎn)，所以他們可以每天步行去海邊玩。我們需要用正確的英語將這些內(nèi)容表達(dá)出來。在示意圖下面有電子郵件的大體內(nèi)容，我們用適當(dāng)?shù)脑~將其補充完整就可以了�？罩胁⒉幌拗圃~的數(shù)量，所以看懂示意圖的內(nèi)容是做題的關(guān)鍵。
【亮點說明】這篇作文是非常優(yōu)秀的。作者根據(jù)題目的要求，和示意圖上的內(nèi)容將這封電子郵件完整的表達(dá)了出來。作者對示意圖的理解非常精確，表達(dá)也很準(zhǔn)確，沒有語法錯誤。第一個空表示的是Mary告訴Rose怎樣從火車站到Mary的家。在示意圖上我們可以明顯看到my home這個詞；第二個空從示意圖上我們可以知道，Rose是坐火車來Mary所在的城市，故這里應(yīng)該是下火車，get off the train；第三空是表示乘坐公交車的意思，動詞是take，表示乘坐；第四個空是表示Mary的家和海邊的距離，far from 的意思是離…遠(yuǎn)；最后一個空根據(jù)示意圖可知，可以步行去海邊，on foot是一個固定的短語。