Question

假如你們英語課上將對“飲食習(xí)慣”這一話題進(jìn)行討論。請你根據(jù)下列提示，用英語寫一篇發(fā)言稿敘述一下你們班同學(xué)的飲食習(xí)慣和你自己對該問題的看法。內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)如下：

部分同學(xué)的不良飲食習(xí)慣	良好的飲食習(xí)慣	個(gè)人看法
Go to school without breakfast Have snacks Eat or drink too much	Have a balanced diet A proper amount of food Eat regularly	Your opinions…

注意：1.發(fā)言稿必須包含所有內(nèi)容要點(diǎn)，可適當(dāng)發(fā)揮；
2.發(fā)言稿開頭已經(jīng)給出，不計(jì)入總詞數(shù)；
3. 詞數(shù)：80-100詞。請寫到答題紙指定位置。
Dear friends,
As we all know, it’s important for us to form healthy eating habits. _____________________
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Answer 1

Dear friends,
As we all know, it’s important for us to form healthy eating habits. Some of us have bad habits ,such as going  to school without breakfast,having snacks and eating or drinking too much. We should develop good eating habits, for example, having a balanced diet, eating a proper amount of food and eating regularly. Bad habits can make our body unhealthy and we may get some kind of disease. On the contrary,good habits can make us healthier and happier. In my opinon, we should eat more fruit and vegetalbes,eat many food which contains protain,less food which contain fat.

試題分析：這是一篇提綱作文。本文分別例舉什么是好習(xí)慣什么是壞習(xí)慣，然后提出自己的觀點(diǎn)，全文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。
【亮點(diǎn)說明】文中使用了非常好的短語和句子為文章增色不少，例如 Some of us，such as，go to chool ,for example,a proper amount of,some kind of ,on the contrary,in my opinon等短語；定語從句如food which contains protain， food which contain fat，文章層次清晰，內(nèi)容飽滿，表達(dá)流暢。