Question

朋友是我們生活不可或缺的部分，總在我們最需要他們的時(shí)候陪伴著我們。你最好的朋友是誰(shuí)呢？你們有什么相同或不同的地方嗎？你們有哪些好的或不好的生活習(xí)慣呢？你是怎樣看待“朋友”這一含義呢？根據(jù)提示，以“My Best Friend and I”為題，寫一篇短文，比較你倆的特征，可適當(dāng)拓展，80詞左右。
提示：1. 外表：都有一頭黑色長(zhǎng)發(fā)；一樣高；比我瘦；
2. 性格：比我文靜，很認(rèn)真；我外向一點(diǎn)，而且比他/她風(fēng)趣；
3. 興趣：都喜歡讀書；他/她愛運(yùn)動(dòng)，籃球打得比我好；
4. 生活習(xí)慣：各自好的或不好的生活習(xí)慣（舉例2點(diǎn)）
5. 你對(duì)朋友這一定義的看法。
My Best Friend and I
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Answer 1

My best friend and I are always together to study and play. But we are diffient from each other in some ways. She is tall with long black hair as me, but she is thinner than me. And she is more serious than me, I am more outgoing than her and I am very humorous. We like reading but she likes doing sports than me. She plays basketball very well. She likes reading in the sun  and doesn’t like eating vegetables. Maybe it is not very good, but I like her, she is my best friend.

試題分析：這是一個(gè)提綱作文。題目給出了標(biāo)題及寫作要點(diǎn)。我們要做的就是用正確的英語(yǔ)句子來(lái)組織這些材料，使之上下連貫，合乎邏輯。根據(jù)題目要求知，本文主要用一般現(xiàn)在時(shí)態(tài)。人稱可以是第一人稱，也可是第三人稱。在寫作時(shí)可以適當(dāng)使用一些連詞，不要教條翻譯給定要點(diǎn)。
【亮點(diǎn)說(shuō)明】本文條理清晰，寫出了要求的各個(gè)要點(diǎn)，但又不顯得啰嗦，就在于作者使用了一些連詞如but、and等等，給文章添色不少。